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Soul's Sign

Posted on Aug 30th, 2006 by jeepdog : Warrior Poet jeepdog

The soft water wears the hardest,
cutting through rock,
deep valleys made.
It matters not how the soft water feels,
nor the cool comfort that it brings.
But what matters most in nature is what it does,
creating beauty,
slicing even granite,
this soft element
 is the sharpest.

Words written or spoken,
without a point lacking context,
are meaningless and worthless.
It matters not how pleasantly the semantics read,
nor the images in the mind they invoke.
But what matters most in society are what they do,
communicating ideas,
reducing confusion,
these thoughtful constructs
Allow minds to be awoken.

Pictures drawn or pictures taken,
black and white or in vivid color,
representing in abstract something finite and physical.
It matters not how the lighting controlled,
nor the colors artistically arranged.
But what matters most to viewers is what they do,
invoking memories,
making visual synaptic connections,
two dimensional objects,
forging mental relativity that are not mistaken.

Lives lived and lives perished,
without a purpose,
are merely vessels of biological process.
It matters not how kind the sprit’s patina appears,
nor the ideas philosophical symbols such as crosses, stars, moons, or knots convey.
But what matters most are the actual deeds done,
altruistically, for unselfish purpose,
for the world community to discover improvement.
It is not the fact that the life was lived that is important,
for it is actual accomplishment that is most cherished.

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BAD! Kitty : Artist with Soul
about 2 hours later
BAD! Kitty said

wow, moving and so true.
Water being the uinversal solvent, indiffrence being the universal soul slovent,
Truth and purpose of being - the universal context of a life worth living, art without soul is just another form of mental masturbation, and the deep seated  need to be fully human  and then more the great elevator to the inner godhead.
Perfect and inspiring again, makes me want to paint…I need supplies!
Thanks again for the words and energy,
Heather

jeepdog : Warrior Poet
about 10 hours later
jeepdog said

I appreciate that you took the time to provide feedback.  Once I create the verse, and it is released from the soul, I have difficulty connecting with it once it is complete….I have difficulty connecting with the very raw feelings that spawned the verse.  This one is an exception… it gets me back to the same frame of reference each time, and is quickly turning into one of my favorite muses…

about 15 hours later
Dave said

~Beautiful. Yes indeed. I’ve read it thrice and still have not found enough. ‘Tis most satsfying my freind. Most satisfying indeed.

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